The Blind Trombonist

I've read the first three chapters and here is what I think so far: You actually remind me of myself as a writer when I was younger, LOL. Writing about ...

1. People often call me the oddball of the school, I have only a few friends, but they’re all the friends I need. It sounds like you just threw these ...

Aw, sweet. Your tone suited the story perfectly--snowy and lilting and dreamy. I found myself irresistably pulled into this, so congratulations. On the side of criticism, I found your dialogue ...

Once you introduced her I had a feeling I knew what she was. Just a few things: -Please, for the love of all angels in heaven, don't start your story ...

Last review of my first night on these forums, and you know, you made me happy, because there is really no error for me to complain about today. Sorry about ...

I personally think this idea is very very clever. ^^ That being said, there are still a few issues...hold on let me get this out of my system... :smt044 GRAH!!! ...

I doubt you'll see any new criticism here, everyone is very good at covering things, but here I go. There is a bit of what I call "awkward phrasing" in ...

Ok, I like the story. However, detail is my lover and I want to spend more time with her! (sorry, I'm a crazy person, this is how I talk) Main ...

Very creative...strange, but in a good way. I don't have much to say except that it did seem to switch points of view, but I think that may have just ...

Although MBDA will eventually be posted in it's entirity here, fictionpress already has all of the currently published chapters and installments. Visit to find links to the stories, polls about ...

I like criticizing...but I like it even more when I don't have to criticize. I thought that the story was very beautiful. At the end, it went from being a ...

As you requested, I will stick solely to the characters (not that there was much to criticize, it was well-done. ^^) I really like the girl, she seems like she'll ...

A/N: This story is unique for me, in every way. I don't usually write romance, nor do I write in first-person. It usually feels really awkward to me...but my fictionpress ...

Ok, I have to say there were many mistakes in this particular story...but don't worry, my next installment in my own series will look worse. ^^; There were many spelling ...

Ok, so I really like the concept of this story and I really do not have much criticism to give you. I have to say, I like how open you ...